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otiv29. 05. 2013 17:00:33
Our morning

"Darling, get up, let's go to the mountain pasture,
up there the homeland of our love,
among all the flowers dear to us,
forests, meadows and rock men."

I'm already standing in front of the sports closet,
filling the backpack as if for a bet,
quietly angry at its contents,
since I get it on my shoulders.velik nasmeh

Darling cuts some bacon,
without it there's no real mountain experience,
since it tastes good to both with bread,
before one lies down in the grass.

I'll take care of the drinks,
at the "goldenhorn" spring I'll scoop.mežikanje
We had almost turned to the car,
when I realized we had forgotten the thumbs.

I return to the apartment,
also the home of our kitty.
Now finally we set off,
to greet the coming morning.

Our morning1
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slavi090229. 05. 2013 18:42:41
@otiv... thanks for such wonderful poems
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otiv29. 05. 2013 19:26:54
@slavi0902 with pleasurenasmehmežikanje
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Scabiosa29. 05. 2013 21:14:09
Vito, you know how to make us laugh ... wonderfully composed nasmehjezik
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otiv29. 05. 2013 22:37:08
@Scabiosa tears of laughter are medicine, for me it also serves as "ink"nasmehmežikanje
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otiv31. 05. 2013 14:06:01
To Roblek

From Draga towards Roblek we two set off,
sweating on the road for cars.
At Planinci cows greeted us,
inviting to a sip of milk.

Draga tells me:
"What funny thing do you think of in your head,
so I can laugh,
or even dance."

"I know what would make you happy,
to sit in my backpack,
while I puff like a locomotive,
the one on solid fuel."

"No, I'd like to sit on your knees,
though they are dry as logs."
"Don't criticize them too much,
I like them just like that."

We laughed heartily,
though fog was teasing us.
We grabbed a log by the path
and with it continued to the hut.
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miri31. 05. 2013 14:15:10
You still have stamina.velik nasmeh
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Scabiosa31. 05. 2013 14:38:41
You inspire ... zavijanje z očmi
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slavi090231. 05. 2013 17:12:12
from your poems, true love and respect for the partner emanates....keep going like this, it's a real pleasure to read you
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otiv1. 06. 2013 07:59:23
Jalovec

Sun rises in the morning,
view of Jalovec captivates me.
Its walls glow,
memories rush to the past.

To happy childhood years,
from Tamar to Sleme the whole gang went.
Back then I didn't know its meaning,
the burden of mountain love.

All that I learned later,
forging into a mountaineer among mountain visits.
In youth three times on the summit stood,
always respected its ascents.

Jalovec not height champion,
winner of heart's greatness,
thus we all respect him,
for true mountaineer, biblical reading.
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slavi09021. 06. 2013 20:06:32
thanks for the poem about Jalovec, for me the most beautiful and favorite mountain in Slovenia
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otiv18. 06. 2013 15:06:12
Memories

The brook playfully babbles,
hurries over stones to the valley.
Animals quench their thirst there,
flowers adorn its surroundings.

Here with Dad we made our first mill,
which turns in thoughts as a memory.
He also made us flutes,
each of us flew around with his own.

We all liked going to the hills,
sometimes we also missed a train.
There were more children at home,
we often played cats and mice.

Beautiful are these childhood memories,
when there was always a whole team of us.
Of course with all relatives together,
who sadly are no longer "here" with us.
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otiv3. 07. 2013 06:45:48
My Raduha

I call her my darling,
for me a true mountain fairy tale,
she gave me so much beauty,
soothed life's troubles, heart wounds.

In winter or summer, these trips are pleasant,
especially when the forests are dressed in gold.
Snow doesn't deter me from visiting her,
especially when it squeezes my soul.

I'm heartily glad for her flowers,
always like to sit on her summit,
enjoying views of nearby peaks,
which carried me away as if on waves.
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otiv2. 11. 2013 12:50:27
Mountains always offer us something beautiful,
so we feel rich in our hearts.

Autumn's colorful opus is ending,
gray color prevails in mountains again.

But warm sun still delights us,
though it sits lower in the sky.

With winter's arrival, joy again,
for in it we'll find hidden wishes.




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otiv11. 11. 2013 10:26:26
Ojstrica

Above the pearl valley rises the queen,
on its top I feel like a bird.
All around familiar peaks are seen,
far below Savinja river banks.

With joy I bite into its steep slopes,
I wish its ridge wouldn't end,
which leads me from Little Ojstrica,
to the top of this mountain beauty.

When I started ascent in the valley,
sun greeted me in Škrbina.
Further on pure mountain pleasure,
that I'd pay a round on the top.

All this of course in flower time,
when one doesn't need shelter.
In winter I just observe it
dressed in white I admire.
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otiv15. 12. 2013 09:37:37
Oh you damned fog,
go back where you came from.
Now we've had enough of you,
especially me at the seaside.

In the mountains of course it's different,
the warm sun shines without pay.
Whoever managed to get above the fog
found lots of energy for the body.

We two were also treated to the sun,
but these days it ends quickly.
So we need to start early,
if we want to sit on the mountain top.nasmeh
On the border between joy and weather sorrow1
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otiv1. 01. 2014 09:25:07
We two

What would I like to tell you,
that we sat in the sunshine
and enjoyed a hundred per hour,
snacked on roast chicken,
of course the younger kind,
that goes down the throat willingly.

We like hills,
dear also fried fish,
since by the sea she has her roots,
mine reach under Stol plains.
Sea or mountains all have their charm,
enjoying their beauty is our gift.

So we're always in good mood,
when we see mountains or sea.
Mountain flowers beautify our trip,
admiring them takes an hour,
so day always passes too fast,
which we can't say for our memories.nasmehmežikanje
Our sea pearl1
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cico1. 01. 2014 09:35:58
@otiv, legend, thanks that on this first January foggy morning I polished myself a bit
with your verses, just now
leaving to seek the sun!velik nasmehvelik nasmehvelik nasmeh
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otiv1. 01. 2014 09:57:00
@cico, verses are a tiny gift to allnasmeh and in our name also gift a smile to the sun.nasmeh
Good luck!
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slavi09021. 01. 2014 17:11:12
@otiv....thanks for livening up the first day of the year
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