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| otiv1. 01. 2014 17:19:45 |
A trifle, @slavi0902, not first league , what's important is only that one also moves the brain a bit 
Good luck!
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| slavi09021. 01. 2014 18:14:49 |
@otiv... good luck and safe steps, wherever you'll walk, and another poem for us who read you gladly
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| otiv1. 02. 2014 10:16:39 |
When the sun doesn't shine,
our hearts beat more slowly.
Everything changes quickly,
when our eyes spot the sun.
Then no need to say it twice,
that outside is nicer than by the stove.
Hills are always first in line,
wishing our steps to be firm.
Without snow no snowman,
like no trip without heart's joy.
We gladly make a snowman,
even more gladly surrender to mountain beauties.
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| otiv17. 02. 2014 16:51:13 |
My legs
Right leg to left says:
"Where are you going?"
"Don't you know? Where you go,
we count steps together, one, two, three."
"What shall we put on those days,
when snow is slowly melting?"
"Hiking boots, of course,
because our master likes looking from mountains to valley."
"Do you know my sole itches too,
all shows spring is coming soon.
But we don't like being cramped
or getting a blister on the path."
"How happy I'll be with dewy grass,
just don't let bee sting me.
At tour's end bath in stream,
in moment all blood circulates."
"Toes happy for freedom,
for today enough joint mischief.
Rest will suit us too,
though we don't see computer screen."
"That's legs' life,
just master not too strict with us.
We gladly carry him around world,
we have enough strength, as duo."
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| miri17. 02. 2014 16:54:44 |
Hats off, pardon, shoes down.
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| otiv17. 02. 2014 16:56:45 |
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| cico17. 02. 2014 17:10:23 |
This is already a higher level of poetry,
what will it be when you grow up? Bravo, legend!
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| otiv17. 02. 2014 18:01:49 |
@cico thanks!
My life has greatly changed,
the love for all beautiful things has guided me.
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| otiv24. 03. 2014 12:21:09 |
Backpack
Be it gray or green,
it is not welcome on my shoulders.
It is a necessary nuisance,
clothes, food, drink are stored in it.
On tour our companion,
for some also an evil obstacle.
Without it it would be bad,
where to put all that "junk".
So I made peace with it,
as I get a snack from it.
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| SamoK24. 03. 2014 19:06:27 |
Let the backpack be red or shaggy
All that is for throwing down.
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| francimedved25. 03. 2014 15:20:07 |
SamoK, for me, and probably most other website visitors, Otiv's verses are really cute and interesting.
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| bagi25. 03. 2014 23:14:54 |
This is also my opinion. I'm not interested in the artistic value and ratings of such and various critics. I like his verses and Otiv is worthy of all respect for me. Positive person who manages to make something sympathetic out of every situation
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| Becar26. 03. 2014 05:30:55 |
If only there were as many such positive people on this forum as @otiv. I wish him many more ideas for verses that I read with pleasure.
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| otiv26. 03. 2014 07:22:09 |
Storm
Dark clouds covered the mountain,
thunder shook my body,
lightning blinded my eyes,
and I already thought there was no help for me.
But as often happens,
the sun drove away all worries.
You are all suns who care about other people's happiness.
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| SamoK26. 03. 2014 08:21:31 |
Diarrhea
I clack, clack, terrible rhymes,
I wonder - when will winter end,
So I can go out into nature again
And stop bothering with brown diarrhea.
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| lizika26. 03. 2014 08:45:49 |
Some people are open-natured,
they are happy with all kinds of fun.
They see everything beautiful in nature,
that's why they go to the mountains.
But there are also people who are made differently.
They are empty, without content, embittered.
You know Samo, if perhaps you are like that,
it doesn't mean you are a weirdo yet.
Even less a fool,
but whoever insults others is certainly not a hero !
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| otiv12. 05. 2014 17:11:25 |
In spring snow whitened the mountain pasture,
swept the flowering meadows neatly.
Views of the mountain pasture are of course beautiful,
only the flowers can't warm up with the snow.
The sun will surely do its job,
in a few days everything will bloom again.
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| SamoK12. 05. 2014 17:18:16 |
I clack, clack my rhymes,
Whoever reads it, it grabs them somewhere.
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| Guest3. 07. 2015 07:55:05 |
Telephone of the mother of luck - Frane Milčinski Ježek
In the mountains it's not enough to have good weather, good equipment, knowledge and solid physical fitness.
Often luck is also needed for a safe ascent and descent.
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